Who Am I? Poem by Kelvin Owusu

I like the eyes on you bouncing back at you to look the strength as who you are...it is a great write, dont have to compare your work with others because you made it original, beautiful as your own_Soul

Who am i, and who can i be? so brilliant and fine Gute my friend.

Nothing is better at antithesis than nature itself. Ethically, you have given yourself away to nature and the diction is peculiarly exact and concise. From start to finish, the imagery is beautifully beautiful. Of your poems, thus far, here comes the best if my evaluation is anything to go by.

magnificent. you have another poem named (who am i) i remember that and this one is as beautiful as previous one. i like the contradictions in the first part.so marvelous. cheers~nb

I love this poem. It has beautiful imagery. I get the feeling of mother earth sending a message to everyone. Letting them know how cruel they can be to such a beautiful phenomenon. G

time to discover who am i and what we understand myself in course of time........... beautiful Kevin.......well penned - Musfiq

Interesting subject for the theme title. I too have written one with this title, but I have come to it from a completely different angle. Mine of this subject is entitled - Ode to the Earth - please read and you may chuckle. Adeline

I thought of Earth while reading this....

great poem kelvin, , , , , , keep up...

this piece reminds me who we really are when we write... we are infinite.