Beautiful Creatures Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Beautiful Creatures

Rating: 4.3

The soil which we plant our seeds
beautifully dangerous, remarkable creatures
strangely complicated, a delicate rare breed
shelters, nurturers, the definition of strength and warmth
crazy-sadistic, seductive-angelistic beings

Women, all one of a kind
incredible, intellectual, beyond and between the lines
pain and hardship they endure
apologies that at times we're blind
self-worth, the world is what they deserve

this piece is my way of saying thank you to the women that have inspired me, from the ones who helped raised me to the ones I've encounter through my life.
I learned how to be a man from a woman so thank you.
Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 December 2012

So great and nice because we are all born from one essence. we have no different in our humanity but we will be changed in our actions. so fragrant and nice.

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Stevie Taite 02 December 2012

Well sir, that paints us in a kind light! It was charming to read and thank you, as one of these creatures for this Poem. We can be a bit crazy and annoyingly emotional but generally, we rock! Lol. (liked TR's comment too!)

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 02 December 2012

I go for this, Kelvin. Thank you so much for writing with women as the main character. Yes, I hope there will be more poems to uplift the place of women on earth and among creation.

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Valerie Dohren 02 December 2012

It's heartwarming to know that there are men out there who genuinely have respect for women - both men and women should be shown respect, but throughout history women have so often been considered to be inferior or second class citizens. Thank young kelvin - good one.

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Vijay Sai R 03 December 2012

a great tribute to every women...especially mother

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2015

Nice work with the muse of creation! Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 September 2014

What deserving tribute to the woman creature! You have expressed all that in a manner we could not imagine even. Lovely in all respects.

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Owain Glyn 17 December 2012

You have captured the essence of women well in this piece, Thank the Lord you didn't get into the downsides!

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Lyn Paul 13 December 2012

This is beautiful Kelvin. Acknowleding us as Beautiful Creatures is lovely and makes us feel valuable.. Glad you didn't mention first thing in the morning. Well done.

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Elena Sandu 03 December 2012

Beautifully written! Delightful poem, Thank you!

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