this piece is my way of saying thank you to the women that have inspired me, from the ones who helped raised me to the ones I've encounter through my life.
I learned how to be a man from a woman so thank you.
Beautiful Creatures Poem by Kelvin Owusu - Poem Hunter
Beautiful Creatures
Poem by Kelvin Owusu
The soil which we plant our seeds
beautifully dangerous, remarkable creatures
strangely complicated, a delicate rare breed
shelters, nurturers, the definition of strength and warmth
crazy-sadistic, seductive-angelistic beings
Women, all one of a kind
incredible, intellectual, beyond and between the lines
pain and hardship they endure
apologies that at times we're blind
self-worth, the world is what they deserve
Poem Submitted: Friday, November 30, 2012
Poem Edited: Saturday, December 1, 2012
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Nice work with the muse of creation! Thanks for sharing.
Report ReplyWhat deserving tribute to the woman creature! You have expressed all that in a manner we could not imagine even. Lovely in all respects.
Report ReplyYou have captured the essence of women well in this piece, Thank the Lord you didn't get into the downsides!
Report ReplyThis is beautiful Kelvin. Acknowleding us as Beautiful Creatures is lovely and makes us feel valuable.. Glad you didn't mention first thing in the morning. Well done.
Report ReplyBeautifully written! Delightful poem, Thank you!
Report Replya great tribute to every women...especially mother
Report ReplyIt's heartwarming to know that there are men out there who genuinely have respect for women - both men and women should be shown respect, but throughout history women have so often been considered to be inferior or second class citizens. Thank young kelvin - good one.
Report ReplyI go for this, Kelvin. Thank you so much for writing with women as the main character. Yes, I hope there will be more poems to uplift the place of women on earth and among creation.
Report ReplyWell sir, that paints us in a kind light! It was charming to read and thank you, as one of these creatures for this
Report ReplyPoem. We can be a bit crazy and annoyingly emotional but generally, we rock! Lol. (liked TR's comment too!)
So great and nice because we are all born from one essence. we have no different in our humanity but we will be changed in our actions.
Report Replyso fragrant and nice.
wow..what a brilliant idea and topic to write.
Report Replywomen......the most beautiful delicate complicated creatures.god must be so genius that created women.
i wonder if the god himself is a woman.just like that ancient greek god i mean- Isis-.
or the world and the universe is female.
i have always thought why or how could some people like Friedrich Nietzsche(one of my great witers) write those things about women? ? ? ! ! ! the only answer i could find is that he began the feminism.
i think women deserve even more than this.even more than isis.
not only the women but also the men praise this great art.
i enjoyed alot.
god bless you~nb
You've just about summed them up well there Kelvin. Nice poem
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