Who First Time Kissed Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Who First Time Kissed
Neither the dense clouds, nor the winds exciting,
You entered in her as a beauty inviting.
It were you who rained on the soil too dry
Here is a paradise; hell may be at the sky,
It were you who danced as the showers
It were you who sprung into flowers,
Neither birds nor beasts, nor a human, or a Jinn,
It's none else, wasn't me, who committed this sin,
The weather was pleasant, and long were your arms,
Drunk in the wine of your ecstatic charms
It wasn't a girl, wet and visible in a suit of lawn
Having dreamed a kiss in her teens she came as a dawn
It wasn't a boy in the rains; she was difficult to be missed,
It wasn't me, it were you, who first time kissed!
And if the proceeding dusk lead to a moonlit night
Don't hide your naughty face, it's too much bright.
Many congratulations for this amazing poem being selected as POD!
Lovely poem. Expressions so pleasing to the heart and soul. The muse of good times distributing her bounties to the nature around and a few selected goodies to the blessed one. Thanks & Congrats, Akhtar Sahab. It were you who rained on the soil too dry Here is a paradise; may be at the sky, It were you who danced as the showers It were you who sprung into flowers,
Very sensuous poem about love and seduction..
CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your pretty poem as the Poem of the Day in member section. Dense clouds have kissed this sky of emotion and wind has kissed the sky. Nature's first kiss has valued more. Pleasant weather gives visible charm. This poem is an excellent poem well drafted with nice imagery...10
Ecstatic charm has wonderfully motivated natural breath and beauty of hope and life. Moonlight has created a bright beam of face of perception. Pleasant weather has captured the petals of flowers. Such wonderful poem definitely deserves to be the poem of the day. A powerful imagery is witnessed in this poem. Always you have excellent idea in poetry composition....10
Many congratulations for such a beautiful piece of writing, which really deserves the POD title,
This is why we write; to put in words a feeling that may resonate with the reader. Akhtar, you are gifted!
It is not the girl or the boy, but nature that gives us the first feeling of love by making us aware to the beauty all around.Let me quote a few lines from this wonderful poem- - - - It were you who danced as the showers It were you who sprung into flowers, Neither birds nor beasts, nor a human, or a Jinn, It's none else, wasn't me, who committed this sin, - -Congratulations for Poem of the Day.
Here to revisit this wonderful poem that has been woven with beautiful words and lovely thoughts. Congratulations, Akhtar for Poem of the Day. Another laurel for your golden pen.
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Congratulations Akhtar for Poem of the Day. I'm thinking of spring throughout your lovely write.