Who Was He (Childrens Christmas Story) Poem by louis rams

Who Was He (Childrens Christmas Story)

Rating: 5.0


once upon a christmas day
when the children had came out to play
there in the snow on the ground
a baby was there that they found
the baby was as white as the snow
and his cheeks had such a glow.
he was wrapped in a blanket of red
and the snow was his bed.
most children would have cried
from the cold.
but he was laughing
or so i was told.
his laughter was quite different.
it wasn't a ha-ha-ha.
but a ho-ho-ho.
the children picked him up to take him inside
to show their parents
their brand new find.
the parents shocked and dismayed
none knew- just what to say.
who would have the heart to put
this child abandoned in the snow.
his body temperature from what i see
is as perfect as can be.
now you know that the police
are forty miles away.
what can we do, what can we say.
we have no phone and very little gas
should we keep him, or should we pass?
there's not enough food to go around
and now another mouth that you found.
the baby lying in the bed
pointed up above his head
waved his finger all around
and food came tumbling to the ground.
he waved his finger one more time
and at their feet, christmas boxes galore
like you'd find in a department store.
all with labels with their names
clothing, shoes, and electronic games.
looking at the baby in total surprise
there came a gleam in his eyes.
the baby laughed his ho-ho-ho- again.
'this is for you my wonderful friends.'
you helped others when you couldn't help yourselves
and shared the little bread with others
and called them your sisters and brothers.
now it's time for you to receive
for all the kindness that you've achieved.

and quick as a lightning he was gone.
but he left the red blanket to carry them on.

now my children i must ask
who was the one that created this task?

faith and love will rule this world
teach it to your boy and girl.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 19 December 2009

A great mixture of the past and presant in the art of giving. A great story

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Ernestine Northover 13 December 2009

This is a delightful story Louis, a really clever storyline to it and a real pleasure to read. thank you for pointing me in its direction. A beautiful weave. You should take up writing childrens books. Christmas blessings to you also and keep in touch. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Kranthi Pothineni 09 December 2009

Surly will pass it on. Nice one to share. Thanks for sharing.

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a sweet story bro.. an important story too.

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