Whose Message Is This In Your Poem! ! ! Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Whose Message Is This In Your Poem! ! !
Whose message is this in your poem
And for whom your heart conceives love
Eyes have dried up after continuous tears
Then from where the waves come in this sea
Desires ask this in desperation now
These birds chatter for whom
When stars twinkles in the moonless night
Then for whom these fireflies glow
Have seen blood streaming from the heart
Then whose blood is this on those eyes.
Too Good, I pick these two lines When stars twinkles in the moonless night Then for whom these fireflies glow
Whose message is this in your poem And for whom your heart conceives love....in message of heart is love
Very beautiful...it stirs many emotions from within. Thank you very much for this wonderful poem.
Blood! ! ! ! Moonless night! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
" Desires ask this in desperation now These birds chatter for whom..." Eyes witness many things and much with natural happenings. You have brilliantly penned this amazing poem. We perceive love through nature's message in this poem.
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Fantastic Ghazal, So many innocent questions.10/10