Steep sloped approach
Purple stained hands and lips
Fresh mountain breeze
The scent of blueberries
Wild fall chill
I scramble for more
Will I ever get enough
My blueberry girl
I loved your dream blueberry dear poet....beautifully penned!
A beautiful poem depicting the many hurdles to overcome in life and love. Wonderful images and stunning poetic expressions. To my favorites.
The last line delivers a great tonal shift. Much of the poem reminds me of Plath, and then the last line takes a terrific detour. Brilliant verse, Rob.
Thank you all for the lovely feedback! My experiences with wild blueberries are enduring and lifelong! Glad to f
If we keep our expectations in check, we will most likely be better satisfied. Fantastic message. Full *****
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love this Rob! Thanks for sharing x