Any new ideas or thoughts lately?
You don't want to tell.Ok, so
You have closed up your mind like a window,
So the rain and the wind could beat on it.
A closed window.Mmmmmmm.Interesting.Your closed window.
When are you going to open the window of your heart,
So that sweet love can fly in like a dove?
Open the window of your heart
So that sweet, soothing love can fly in.
An angel messenger of good tidings. A hopeful poem, optimistic and full of positivity! ! ! Well done for being chosen you deserve to it.
Nice simile and quite romantic. Congrats for being he member's PoD.
enoch, on seeing the title i thought of the paul simon song graceland- one of my favorites by him. in it there's a line that goes losing love is like a window in the heart. having read your words, thank you for the reminder of what is so important. a biblical metaphor on the same idea is replacing our hearts of stone for hearts of flesh. a question: do you think opening ourselves to love is entirely in our control? may love fill, direct, and surround you. glen kappy
Well expressed thoughts and feelings written with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.
Congrats on it's member Poem Of the Day. Beautiful lines that will open the window of heart. Unfortunately its closed may be due to some reasons. If every heart is opened so freely, soothing love can fly in. Thought provoking poem with simple and beautiful lines captured my heart. Well written. Loved reading it.
A beautifully envisioned meaningful and thought provoking conceptualization presented in amazingly simple and sweet verse. Thanks for sharing and Congrats on it's member Poem of the Day.
Open the window of your heart and allow love come it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ideas! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.