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Window Of The Heart

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Any new ideas or thoughts lately?
You don't want to tell.Ok, so
You have closed up your mind like a window,
So the rain and the wind could beat on it.
A closed window.Mmmmmmm.Interesting.Your closed window.

When are you going to open the window of your heart,
So that sweet love can fly in like a dove?
Open the window of your heart
So that sweet, soothing love can fly in.

Saturday, December 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 17 December 2016

Nice simile and quite romantic. Congrats for being he member's PoD.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 17 December 2016

A beautiful poem enjoyed

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Christina Simmons 17 December 2016

An angel messenger of good tidings. A hopeful poem, optimistic and full of positivity! ! ! Well done for being chosen you deserve to it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2016

Ideas! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Glen Kappy 17 December 2016

enoch, on seeing the title i thought of the paul simon song graceland- one of my favorites by him. in it there's a line that goes losing love is like a window in the heart. having read your words, thank you for the reminder of what is so important. a biblical metaphor on the same idea is replacing our hearts of stone for hearts of flesh. a question: do you think opening ourselves to love is entirely in our control? may love fill, direct, and surround you. glen kappy

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Chinedu Dike 10 January 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings written with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 December 2016

Congrats on it's member Poem Of the Day. Beautiful lines that will open the window of heart. Unfortunately its closed may be due to some reasons. If every heart is opened so freely, soothing love can fly in. Thought provoking poem with simple and beautiful lines captured my heart. Well written. Loved reading it.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 December 2016

A beautifully envisioned meaningful and thought provoking conceptualization presented in amazingly simple and sweet verse. Thanks for sharing and Congrats on it's member Poem of the Day.

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Gladys Brown Prince 17 December 2016

Open the window of your heart and allow love come it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 December 2016

Excellent poem+++++++++++

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