Aqua Flower


Wishes - Poem by Aqua Flower

When love is lost the princess weeps
she ponders on her feet
what will make her happy
the prince she wants she cannot keep
No spell can make it happen
no potion can bring the magic
she holds her cold heart
as if it needs a jacket
she wants her prince to come
to be her only one
to cease her life of lonely
to be her one and only

Topic(s) of this poem: longing, wish, wishing


Comments about Wishes by Aqua Flower

  • Vanessa HughesVanessa Hughes (3/23/2019 12:06:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, this princess sounds quite depressed I think. Hope she realised there is more to life than having a prince. Good stuff x (Report)Reply

    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(3/23/2019 10:43:00 AM)

    Thank you for visiting. Although I sound quite depressed I'm not always this way. Losing something makes you sad. Depression is a chronic thing which I hope to never have I do have happiness in other aspects of my life. It would be enriched to have the love in my life to share it with. Again thanks for reading and commenting

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  • Carl RoussellCarl Roussell (8/22/2018 8:49:00 AM)

    There can be no rest in the loneliness she is feeling. The lines, she holds her cold heart as if it needs a jacket, are really good. A 10. (Report)Reply

    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(8/23/2018 7:14:00 AM)

    Thank you Carl. That image I thought was a good description of love lost. I'm glad you liked it.

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (8/22/2018 12:57:00 AM)

    Such a lovely fairy tale....10++++ (Report)Reply

    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(8/23/2018 7:18:00 AM)

    Thank you for not for always reading my poems and for appreciating fairy tales.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (8/21/2018 11:02:00 PM)

    The anguish of the princess is quite moving. The poem looks like the part of a fairy tale
    with the reader asking for more. Thank you, Dear Poet.
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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(8/23/2018 7:18:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading this poem. You have read the princesses anguish quite well. Love is sort of a fairytale that everyone wants to come true.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2018

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 23, 2018


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