Without Compare Poem by Hazel Durham

Without Compare

Rating: 5.0


The start was slow and unpredictable,
You attracted me with your nature and handsome face,
So soft, like my own secret loft,
High emotions, tenderness, openness,
But your soul carries a heavy load,
Like a farm gate, that needs to be tightly closed,
You make me feel like a precious stone, luscious, flaming red,
With your supreme love in bed,
So macho, you always led,
Many facets of your character emerged with surprise,
Hand in hand through this tranquil land,
Fields wet dripping with past toil,
Mountains glazed with cotton wool mist,
You have me at the top of your wishing list,
Embracing with pasts,
Filled with sorrow and pain,
In a leafy lane,
The breeze softly caressing our fragile hearts,
Within our lair,
Your care,
Is without compare.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanav Justa 01 January 2014

.. a brilliant romantic poem... every sentence is beautiful.. and love the title as well...

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Ramesh Rai 14 November 2013

Keep writing my friend.poetry needs you more. without you poetry will loose her pacific balance. but dont forget to invite to make me deprive from making a dive in your swt emotion

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Maya Hanson 07 April 2013

So romantic- you have me at the top of your wishing list I wish I could write like this! ! ! Great job ~mye3 poet

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Karen Degnan-foiles 30 March 2013

Loved it! You really kept my attention... and what a beautiful story too. ~Karen

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Valerie Dohren 28 March 2013

Romantic and heartfelt - another lovely poem Hazel.

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Jankovic Zoran 16 February 2019

When is unlocked the Irish Heart in this way - that is Without compare

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Heartfelt and touching! Well done my friend!

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Chinedu Dike 14 January 2015

A beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a fantastic poem. A superbly written piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Yash Shinde 13 March 2014

.....wonderful use of imagery...n metaphors....a great work as always hazel....

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Adeline Foster 22 February 2014

Nice love poem. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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