Words Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

Words

Rating: 5.0


Living bright amidst the horizon
The rays of gold thus had shone,
Dreams of happiness, roving mind
All that's dark, been left behind.
Love and kisses blown in the air,
Midnight hours, passionate lair..
Blue sky calling thy name aloud,
Seductive feelings thus enshroud!
Empty heart searched for you,
Longing to plunge into season anew,
Lustful whispers, touch and feel
Life's good, full of zeal!
Uttering those eternal words few
You are mine and I love you!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 11 October 2012

Nice Words! Very simple, You are mine and I love you.The expression is pregnant with meaning.I loved the write. Thanks for sharing.With regards.

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Persian Khushi 09 October 2012

Wow! Awesome! like a child i feel excited reading your rhythmic display of WORDS hopping on one foot. even though its abt LOVE.

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Hans Vr 09 October 2012

Nice expression of emotions in melodious verses. Good poem

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Nurain Ali-balogun 07 October 2012

Wow, that's beautiful...and the end, brilliant.

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Rigzin Namgyal 07 October 2012

..beautiful..as you put it..eternal words..

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Tanveer Sharma 17 November 2012

I liked it a lot from simple title to the creativity.

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Bob Brown 31 October 2012

Lovely expression in a beautiful short poem with nice rhymes. Carry on with the good work!

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Scarlett Cleo Nightingale 30 October 2012

Awww i loved it! brilliant! THe style you write in is lovely...beautiful! .

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Scarlett Cleo Nightingale 30 October 2012

Awww i loved it! brilliant! THe style you write in is lovely...beautiful! .

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Yash Shinde 19 October 2012

describes a great thing in very less words................really as wordsworth said your poems are made of powerful words that create a long-lasting effect on mind

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