..Would You? ? (H) Poem by Dislocated Heart

..Would You? ? (H)

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if i told you i love you..
what will you do?

would you return my love..
would you leave me hanging?
will you hold me once more?

if i wanted you back..
what would you say?
would i be able to sweep you away?
would i be able to make you smile?
would i get another chance?
perhaps..
but ill never know.

my hand shakes of my fear.
my mind.. stops when you are near.
my heart.. skips every couple of beats when your here.

and when you speak.... you simply take my breath away..

maybe its not right..
maybe im not suppose to feel this way..
but i do..
baby.. i do..
and i miss you..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 22 May 2008

Poem shows a lot of feelings

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Angie Melby 23 May 2008

Oh my god dang your hella talented i got one question do you need insperation or do your poems just come to you?

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Allysyn Bryant 23 May 2008

If I was her, I would....

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Sunset moonshine 22 December 2008

hey, this poem is really deep n' i like it... it sounds like the stuff going on in my life right now.... LOL! ! ! *(! _!) *

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*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

this is wow... I really really like this. incredible! ! ! so very sweet.you did a fantastic job with this. Becca

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Very nice! It's one of the most beautiful writes I have ever read. Keep it up my friend. Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Maya Robena 28 August 2008

One Word, Beautiful... (enough said) ->ps.good job! its really sweet

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Bethany M. 12 July 2008

nice poem, I really like it, it has a... well... a feeling inside it. but yeah anyway. very nice!

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