Y..... A Flake Of Truth Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y..... A Flake Of Truth

Rating: 4.9


A flake of truth
A crumb of honesty
A dropp of kindness
A grain of humility

Himalayan mounts of truth
Thousands loafs of honesty
Oceanic fluxes of kindness
Truck loads of humility

From a good start
To a lofty destination



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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From a good start to a lofty destination!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 23 September 2012

A unit of soft emotion gives whole. Very nice thought.

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Full Moon 21 September 2012

u gave a simple, sweet reading. LIKE

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Eindaray Kyaw 18 September 2012

I love from the beginning to the end..great job! !

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Valerie Dohren 17 September 2012

From an acorn grows the mighty oak - great write.

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Valsa George 17 September 2012

In each seed or grain is embedded the promise of a great harvest! ! Similarly a good deed is infectious. It can lead to a long train of virtuous deeds! ! Simple and beautiful poem!

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Walterrean Salley 28 October 2012

From a molehill to a mountain. Simple, and yet so profound. Love it, and thanks for the penning.

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Dave Walker 13 October 2012

A fantastic poem, the truth is what we all want, but don't always get.

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Rizvana Parveen 08 October 2012

Beautiful composition...Infact a flake of truth.....a grain of humility makes all the difference.Tfs.

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Spiritual Seeker 25 September 2012

Wise words from a wise poet! Thanks...a great 10.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 September 2012

From the little to the great! A good write.Thanks.

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