Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 17,757 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. A Whiff Of Conscience - Poem by Aufie Zophy

A whiff of conscience
whispers in our heart
listening in absolute silence
hearing it, a work of art

A bright flame of goodness
for our eyes to see
A fire of rightness
warmth on our skin to feel

Soft winds of love, so kind
blowing breeze of soul
illuminating our mind
an ideal, an inspirational call

Nectar of honesty
Roses of integrity
Aromas dancing merrily
Cherry blossoms of charity

A whiff of conscience
Sitting somewhere deep inside
Shining throughout the universe
An inextinguishable light

(Bachok,3 July 2014)

Topic(s) of this poem: Soul

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Related to a reflection I made yesterday:
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Comments about Y/. A Whiff Of Conscience by Aufie Zophy

  • Terry Craddock (1/4/2017 2:10:00 AM)

    Holocaust Turning Hearts Or Blind Eye Choices

    beautiful minds illuminating beautiful souls
    a whiff of conscience sows righteous heroic deeds
    when nightmare lives oppose dictator tyrants

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Y/. A Whiff Of Conscience' by the poet Aufie Zophy.
    Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.
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  • Terry Craddock (1/3/2017 4:28:00 PM)

    'A whiff of conscience
    whispers in our heart'

    beautiful lines illuminating beautiful souls, an exquisite masterpiece Aufie
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  • (8/3/2014 4:05:00 PM)

    Excellent poem, so simple and poignant. Our souls do whisper to us, if we'd only listen. Fantastic imagery throughout, flowing with a rhythm of spirituality. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2014 9:56:00 PM)

    simply love this poem...soo nice to read in this blessed spiritual month! ! A wonderous big 10! (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2014 4:20:00 AM)

    Excellently written poem but sadly as Valerie has put it, for some its really not the case, some don't even have conscience at all. I wish many people would read this superb poem of yours Hans.
    Siya_! !
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  • Valsa George (7/14/2014 11:00:00 PM)

    In the stillness of silence we hear a mysterious whisper like a gentle whiff of wind passing over, communing with our soul urging us to do actions which have the aroma of roses and the beauty of cherry blossoms...... It whispers to us what is good and what is evil..... It is a segment of the Universal Spirit! Beautiful poem.... Reading this I felt it has close resemblance to one of my poems.... at least in content... A Mysterios Voice. I invite you to read it! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/7/2014 2:44:00 PM)

    Let's hope that whiff of conscience will always be around to keep us all in check, although sadly for some, , this is often not the case. Great write Hans. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (7/6/2014 5:01:00 AM)

    Conscience acts as light.It dispels the darkness of mind.A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2014 11:14:00 AM)

    Really like this poem and all that it allies to! Some great lines in here! Love the line, Cherry blossoms of charity. Very beautiful imagery throughout! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 3, 2014

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