Y.. Humility Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y.. Humility

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When we bend forward
When we kneel
To praise our God
Let's become truly humble

When we bend or kneel
To praise our God
Let's decide to give up
The childishness of adulthood

After we ‘ve bent or kneeled
To praise our God,
Let's live the child-like life of children
A child-like life full of love and wonder

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 08 October 2011

And when we genuflect our kneels before Him as a honour or fear of Him or to praise him or to forgive our sins...Look into His eyes as a child's heart, is the pure heart, , He will bless us with his countless mercy... It's a wonderful, it healing my mind when I remember Him for what I being praising Him.....pious write...

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To Windward 11 October 2011

I like the subtle turning of the meanings of childhood and childish and agree very much with the sentiment.

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Jacqui Broad 29 October 2011

Become once again sweet, innocent angels. That would be so good - the end of misery... Great poem...

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Eric Cockrell 22 October 2011

absolutely true, and sacred! good poetry!

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Elena Sandu 17 October 2011

Yes, heart of a child, clean sweet and kind! Adults to back up, what a world we'd have! Lovely poem, thank you for share,10

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Unwritten Soul 17 October 2011

Realistic and great poem... the theme is strong and the word knitted in very beautiful pattern.. the end lines of 'Let’s live the child-like life of children A child-like life full of love and wonder' Perfectly ideal, beautiful mind to conclude all you written above_Unwritten Soul

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Malaya Roses 11 October 2011

We are suppose to revive the point of sincerity and plain mind... The poet write this issue in the best way we suppose to be. Wise and excellent value is within this poem...! ! ! ! ! Excellent.

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