Y/. Jungle Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/. Jungle

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When we were born
A grain of love was planted
It spouted in our little hearts

And our baby smiles
Could not be contained
It went on growing

It blossomed, bloomed,
Fruited, filling our being
The joy of giving

It kept growing and flowing
the delight of loving
A true jungle of kindness

Monday, September 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: kindness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 01 October 2013

Beautiful concept Aufie, we can but hope.

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Unwritten Soul 07 October 2013

A message delivered now...hope the postman will not forget to spread this mail for every person in this world because in such simplicity it brought basic thing about life and love _Soul

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Rekha Mandagere 22 November 2013

Beautiful imagery is used here. Love is as mysterious as a jungle inspires one to live sharing everything to the beloved ones.I just loved the voice of the poem.

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Patricia Grantham 21 November 2013

A little poem but big on love. I love this write it is so full of beauty and very delightful. Caring and sharing what could be better. Loved this.

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Ambrosia A 07 November 2013

Wow, what a great message in a li'i poem. Hope the seeds of kindness and unconditional love you are planting in your poems, will emerge as a jungle of peace one fine day.

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Kanav Justa 06 November 2013

A great poem... simple but well written

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 08 October 2013

Beautiful love and peace pleading poem thank brother write more in the topic thank

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