Y..... Quarks Inside Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y..... Quarks Inside

Rating: 4.2


The morning sunlight
In all its glory
The morning sunlight
In all its glam

Every molecule in my heart
Is jumping up and down
The quarks inside collide
Emanating a mini beam of light

I hope that this little beam of light
Coming from my heart in a way
Can just like the morning sun
Brighten the lives of those I meet today


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 October 2012

Wow what a sweet poem expressd in commendable rhymin flow!

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Heather Wilson 14 October 2012

I`m sure you set everyone you met on course for a bright day, a lovely poem.

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Neela Nath Das 14 October 2012

The beam must make your day bright. So marvelous expression!

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Terry O'leary 16 October 2012

Quarks or anti quarks... in either case, your poem has brightened my day (& night) ... Terry

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 October 2012

very good thought and the brightness of the sun will brighten up everyone!

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Elena Sandu 11 November 2012

I came back to this poem to read it again! How true! Sun is one of the best energy is free and we ony need to open hearts to accumulate then overcharged we can give light to others with no special efforts, without even being tired.

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Malaya Roses 11 November 2012

The ray of sunshine shall sparkle your day and the light shall brighten people next to you... Wonderful poem with sincere spirit within...! ! !

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Malaya Roses 11 November 2012

The ray of sunshine shall sparkle your day and the light shall brighten people next to you... Wonderful poem with sincere spirit within...! ! !

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Nader Baheri 22 October 2012

what a wonderful ending.i really hope u warm and enlighten those u meet everyday nice and so positive.this poem really brightened me up. muchas gracias for sharing

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Elena Sandu 19 October 2012

What a poem! ! ! This is wonderful, I love it! I am sure everyone you met that day was filled with smiles feeling their hearts lighted. My heart is warmer now, your beam did thank you!

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