Y..... Row Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y..... Row

Rating: 5.0


Sitting at the river bed
I prayed to God, I said
Please help me, show the way
Show me the light of day

Then in front of me
a small boat passed
a man was rowing

I suddenly realised
God gave already the water
God gave already the boat
But I had to row

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 15 November 2012

ah yes, so good, so true.

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Unwritten Soul 17 November 2012

Yes dear, sometimes we didnt see what is in front of us is a guide, a hint, a clue and an assistant...We born as specialist to complete each others.. We pray to Him and He not make all suddenly happen, the mind that we have is the gift that we should use in any reason for good because there is always love we will find if we think....how you will understand what i am saying without thinking, and how much love is coming when you understanding....and yes we should see what we have now..llife...could be died if we ignorant but with His love life to alive again_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 02 November 2012

And we have brains for a reason - to use them! ! I am the master of my fate, I am the Captain of my soul. Good one Aufie.

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Spiritual Seeker 03 November 2012

A man who travel a thousand miles is wiser than a person who read a thousand pages from a book....keep rowing my friend, beautiful poem! Great 10.

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Malaya Roses 06 November 2012

Man's effort could change the destiny of his life... Excellent poem to read...

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Lyn Paul 29 December 2012

If only we all realised how fortunate we are. Well written

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John Raubenheimer 17 December 2012

A revelation in just a few effortless lines. Thank you.

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Owain Glyn 02 December 2012

You may drag a Horse to water, but he's much too heavy to throw in!

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Shahzia Batool 19 November 2012

God gave us skills and chances, ability, wisdom and will, he is a Supreme Creator and loves creativity...and wonderful is Man -the crown of creation who understands the signs of His teaching!

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Shahzia Batool 19 November 2012

God gave us skills and chances, ability, wisdom and will, he is a Supreme Creator and loves creativity...and wonderful is Man -the crown of creation who understands the signs of His teaching!

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