Y/ When I Feel Low Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/ When I Feel Low

Rating: 4.7


When I feel low in energy
I make a walk on the beach
I think of the goodness of God
I think a positive thought
And I do not feel low anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Change of environment...nice to read..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 May 2013

again a nice one goodness of Lord, positive thought.....Low to high energy state lovely, you write beautifully

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Unwritten Soul 18 May 2013

The vibration from the softness inside the foam, the golden shine from the sand they sending you a touch from Him that you always not alone, He always there.. Anywhere is your home_Soul

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Kanav Justa 18 May 2013

nature is the ultimate remedy to human miseries, , , ,

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Wahab Abdul 19 May 2013

a very utilitarian thought..thank you giving motivation..this is a universal truth.. you made it.. love it..

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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

a lovely thought. God is always near.

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Ken E Hall 31 May 2013

Mind over matter in this short poem with the thoughts of our maker who makes your day lift, love the way you travel...regards

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Joseph Anderson 25 May 2013

Ever so sweet. A stroll through natures beauty will lift one's spirits. A brief and endearing write, with some lasting thoughts

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David Wood 25 May 2013

Hi Hans, A very thought provoking poem. God is all around us.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 May 2013

Short and sweet but very true! In Nature is the reflection of GOD!

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