Monday, July 13, 2009

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C. P. Sharma
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010

Its both innocence and ‘Unison One’…economic in words but lavish in vibe … thanks Sir for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

I see my own reflection in you, Rachel Ann Butler

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Ruth Walters 19 August 2009

and yet we all have this ability to be intolerant with ourselves and our reflections, even the mirror sometimes; -) Ruthy

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This is what all the great prophets have taught throughout time. To have tolerance for one another. A simple philosophy that has become complicated and it starts with each one of us. Brilliant writing! 10 Karin Anderson

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Ivor Hogg 28 July 2009

brevity begets wisdom

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Sonya Florentino 28 July 2009

strongly put! ...we project ourselves on others so it must be self-hatred....

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Sandra Fowler 27 July 2009

We should be as tolerant of ourselves as we are of others. Excellent write. Always your friend, Sandra

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Meggie Gultiano 25 July 2009

just be tolerant.It is you you're talking about. A reflection of who you are. Nice thought..I love this

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Indira Renganathan 24 July 2009

The split personality introspects...a hidden treasure....thanks

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Lady Grace 22 July 2009

a 3-lined strong poem..but hundreds of detailed words inside...

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Nikunj Sharma 22 July 2009

awesome.......great thought and deep meaning.

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Mamta Agarwal 21 July 2009

when we really see ourselves in the mirror for what we are, we realise our imperfections. Mamta

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a game of the shelled self i suppose...very well written

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 July 2009

very strong and with deep meaning... great thoughts..... seen the reflections but never do any action on whatever is seen... thanks for sharing sir..a piece makes us to reflect too 10+++ lovelots, maia

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Obed Souza 15 July 2009

Hate blurs the creature´s vision! Short and sharp! Lovely piece.

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Onelia Avelar 15 July 2009

The mirror reflects without to accept or to absorb the image, yes it could be called intolerant, because in fact it does not accept us - it throws our image back to us without to take it too deeply or too seriously ;) Thought-provoking three lines! :)

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Perhaps you have less tolerance that you thought, the mirror reflecting this back to allow you to see your own intolerance. It made me think......so that's important! 10 Karin Anderson

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Rakesh Bedi 14 July 2009

....... Excellent, sir! Wnen one is unable to tolerate ones self, intolerant one becomes! !

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

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