You Are.........[ This Poem Had A Very Special Inspiration; Humor? ? ; Not Serious; S H O R T ] Poem by Bri Edwards

line 5 should say seen, not see. oops! ! ! hopefully it is in the process of being corrected, and i'm just waiting for it to be done! bri :)

Always you express amazing humor in your many of the poems. Yes, you are very right. Your best wishes shall always go out to Darlene!

I was just going through the poet's note area....it was composed way back in 2015 in response to a wonderful LOVE poem by Darlene Walsh! Very nice but you have presented her tone in different style! Surely, you have added much humor to this poem! However, I can't call it a wonderful love poem! (Cont..)

see my own comment below

It is always lovely to read your humour. Thank You for your Poet Notes regarding Darlene. We all know of each other yet know nothing about each other. So Thank You Bri.

Now, I wonder what you looked like to her? With ice-cream dripping and a beery stench? Thanks Bri

A fine poem with wonderful rhyme. Except for the second line of the first stanza where it says: You're the one I most like to.....abuse.: -) I think it's a different kind of abuse you mean here: -) I like the humor in this poem especially the last line. It's true if one does not stop eating one would surely look like a hog out of shape. Nudershada

Whatever may be the case, i enjoyed the poem a lot! The opening couplet made me to think and smile! Thanks for sharing..................10