Sanjib Das

You Come In My Dream

You come in my dream as a lover,
I want to be your true lover
The stars are blooming in the skies,
Still you are in my eyes
Once you told me you loved me in your message,
In my suffering, your words give me recess
Your loving words give me inspiration,
Now, I write poetry full of passion.

If you don't love me, you tell me lies,
There is no tear in my eyes
May be you have a lot of admirer,
I am only your true lover
When I had survived from my accident,
I considered your love became my defendant
May be my thought was wrong,
I still scatter your song(poetry)
I request all to read your poem,
Like Venus, you remain with your fame.

You just tell me I love you,
I want to be loved by you
I humbly request if you feel bother,
You just pretend before me as a lover
If you tell me ' I don't love you',
My mind will be broken by you
Your lying (I love you) gives me a way of living,
Your words give me everything.

I request you to become a lier,
Like Jesus, you become my saviour
When I will leave this world for ever,
You disclose everybody that you are not my lover
I pray to God to forgive you,
Till death I love you
Honestly I am not a pretender,
I am none but your only lover
Our love is one sided(as you don't love me)
In my mind you remain my only beloved.

Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 26, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, June 24, 2011

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  • princess sweetdreams (9/9/2010 11:28:00 AM)

    Oh my lord i absolutely loved this poem..... dont get me wrong the other were great but this particular one was absolutely AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    -Chelce
    AKA: PRINCESS SWEETDREAMS

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  • Anju Addanki (10/5/2009 1:34:00 AM)

    its a very nice and emotional one

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  • Sai Saketh (10/3/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    Is this for true?
    this is really really good.....

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  • Anjali Sinha (10/3/2009 1:20:00 AM)

    Wow sanjib
    Lovely poem
    Full of passion
    I can see your love and emotions
    Nicely expressed here.
    Its sooooooooo touchyyyyyyyyyy
    that I felt to cryyyyyyyy
    But I feel it strange
    That you call her a liar
    And that your love is onesided
    Hope and pray that God gives you
    The strength to recover from your accident
    And that you be blessed by the almighty
    In the coming months of Deepavali
    Lots of love to you
    Regards anjali +++10

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  • %*-Young Song-*% (10/2/2009 4:17:00 PM)

    Simply wonderful! 10

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  • Surya . (10/2/2009 6:03:00 AM)

    a poigant poem.told in a touching way.
    voted10
    surya

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  • Sandra Fowler (10/2/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    How very poignant. Your romantic thoughts
    hurt you into poetry. Take care. Lovely
    write, , ,


    Warm wishes,

    Sandra

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  • Aparna Sinha (10/2/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    smile- a beautiful write...and who is the girl huh? so heartless! ..anyways I like reading your poem always..keep sharing, thank you

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  • Catrina Heart (10/2/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    Great interesting piece........well expressed feelings of love yet sad its only one side of the coin............wish you well! ! ! jobe well done! ! !

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  • Emma AdamyanEmma Adamyan (10/1/2009 1:20:00 PM)

    there are tender and matured poems abt love... the feeling is so unspeakable that each type is attractive, BUT ur poem took all inside it. a mad lover fights with a tender boy who is so carefully loves his musa... u expressed very well crazy love in positive meaning. u showed how great love can be, even if its not mutual..........

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  • Merna Ibrahim (10/1/2009 11:39:00 AM)

    The love from one side is too difficult....your poem is great as your love! !
    Thanks for your comment.10s.
    Merna

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  • Shekhar JoshiShekhar Joshi (10/1/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    Agree with Louis rams.......but yeah sometimes this wish is the one which inspires u to live on.........
    Some interesting line......liked it....... ;)

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (9/30/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    when love is only one sided, it no longer is love.
    but a wish from within,
    pinching you like needles and pins.

    a ten

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (9/30/2009 2:08:00 PM)

    very touchy! heartfelt wording sanjib! well done!
    10+

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  • Lynn Glover (9/29/2009 7:59:00 PM)

    A liers love always ends with a broken heart. Good write I enjoyed it. Thanks, Lynn

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/29/2009 5:38:00 PM)

    Love has a life of its own. Love exhibits pain, fear, sadness, tears (for reason and no reason) , doubt, anger, insomnia, and self-full-filling joy...all in all, love has all the emotions of human. Therefore, we have to learn to live with it as we live with self.Just enjoy the ride-'its better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all' Good write.

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  • Joseph Poewhit (9/29/2009 4:11:00 PM)

    One sided love can be hurtful - very.

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  • Jack David (9/29/2009 2:59:00 PM)

    SOME FRIENDS CRITICISE YOU ON THE GROUND OF GRAMMAR AND THEME, BUT I EXPRESS YOU HAVE A GOD-GIFTED FLOW OF WRITING.I LIKE YOUR PRESENT POEMS BEYOND MEASURE.EVEN SHAKESPEARE MADE MISTAKE IN GRAMMAR, SO, I SUGGEST THOSE FRIEND TO READ LOT OF ENGLISH BOOK NOT ONLY THE GRAMMAR BOOK WRITTEN BY WREN AND MARTIN.SANJIB, THEY ARE ONLY JEALOUS OF YOU.I ENCOURAGE YOU IN THIS NATURAL MANNER DENYING ALL THE WORTHLESS WORDS. NOE DAY YOU WILL BECOME A GREAT POET AND THEY ONLY READ ONLY GRAMMAR BOOKS. I GIVE YOU FULL MARKS 10/10 AND EXPRESS MY CONGRATULATIONS FOR SUCH A GREAT POEM.I REQUEST YOU TO WRITE POEM IN THIS MANNER IN NEAR FUTURE.GOD BLESS YOU.

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  • Rosie Rainey (9/29/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    your overall message is so true. to give all your love for nothing but a lie in return is so painful. youre not alone-

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  • Ravi ARavi A (9/29/2009 1:07:00 PM)

    If you carefully read, you can find out certain grammar mistakes like 'admirer' instead of 'admirers' etc. Grammar is one thing we should not never miss. This is my view. Wren and Martin has to be our Bible. This is what my teachers had taught me.

    Coming to the theme, you want to be her true lover. Unless she recognises your love, you cannot be her true lover. Our true love is best defined in the reciprocation and not in our swearing in the same umpteen times. She may have her own views about you for which she has the freedom as well. In the game of life, this can happen for obvious reasons. We all know about it but we don't usually accept the fact. This is only the missing area. You never can convince her of your true love unless she naturally accepts you. Today's boys and girls are measuring the financial aspects/status etc too much before they got married. This means that romance is not for the sake of romance when it comes to facing realities.

    In the end, the best way to get out of the tragedy is to forget the episode. You may wish to slap me but I don't mind! Such episodes will fill our memories as passing dreams in our old age. Such episodes will best fit into our armchair reflections and nothing more. Take my word, during my your youth I too had my fancies woven around a girl but it did not work out since it was a silent, one sided affair. I too had my share of tears during that period but looking back after nearly three decades, that episode never affects me now. She is very much around me even now but my heart is never pricked by old thoughts. Time is a great healer. I just can't analyse how I could recover from the blow. All of us have this inner strength.

    There is a poem by me 'Yours affectionately' (the last one in the list) . You may definitely read. Let our past remain as a whispering music and not a gathering gale during the rest of our sojourn. This is all I can say.

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