You Come In My Dream Poem by Sanjib Das

You Come In My Dream

Rating: 5.0


You come in my dream as a lover,
I want to be your true lover
The stars are blooming in the skies,
Still you are in my eyes
Once you told me you loved me in your message,
In my suffering, your words give me recess
Your loving words give me inspiration,
Now, I write poetry full of passion.

If you don't love me, you tell me lies,
There is no tear in my eyes
May be you have a lot of admirer,
I am only your true lover
When I had survived from my accident,
I considered your love became my defendant
May be my thought was wrong,
I still scatter your song(poetry)
I request all to read your poem,
Like Venus, you remain with your fame.

You just tell me I love you,
I want to be loved by you
I humbly request if you feel bother,
You just pretend before me as a lover
If you tell me ' I don't love you',
My mind will be broken by you
Your lying (I love you) gives me a way of living,
Your words give me everything.

I request you to become a lier,
Like Jesus, you become my saviour
When I will leave this world for ever,
You disclose everybody that you are not my lover
I pray to God to forgive you,
Till death I love you
Honestly I am not a pretender,
I am none but your only lover
Our love is one sided(as you don't love me)
In my mind you remain my only beloved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 29 September 2009

A liers love always ends with a broken heart. Good write I enjoyed it. Thanks, Lynn

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 September 2009

very touchy! heartfelt wording sanjib! well done! 10+

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Louis Rams 30 September 2009

when love is only one sided, it no longer is love. but a wish from within, pinching you like needles and pins. a ten

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Shekhar Joshi 01 October 2009

Agree with Louis rams.......but yeah sometimes this wish is the one which inspires u to live on......... Some interesting line......liked it....... ;)

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Merna Ibrahim 01 October 2009

The love from one side is too difficult....your poem is great as your love! ! Thanks for your comment.10s. Merna

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princess sweetdreams 09 September 2010

Oh my lord i absolutely loved this poem..... dont get me wrong the other were great but this particular one was absolutely AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -Chelce AKA: PRINCESS SWEETDREAMS

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Anju Addanki 05 October 2009

its a very nice and emotional one

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Sai Saketh 03 October 2009

Is this for true? this is really really good.....

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Anjali Sinha 03 October 2009

Wow sanjib Lovely poem Full of passion I can see your love and emotions Nicely expressed here. Its sooooooooo touchyyyyyyyyyy that I felt to cryyyyyyyy But I feel it strange That you call her a liar And that your love is onesided Hope and pray that God gives you The strength to recover from your accident And that you be blessed by the almighty In the coming months of Deepavali Lots of love to you Regards anjali +++10

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%*-Young Song-*% 02 October 2009

Simply wonderful! 10

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