You Played The Rain Poem by Sandra Fowler

You Played The Rain

Rating: 4.8


You played the rain on your old mandolin.
A rusted roof laid shelter on my heart.
Song wove a weather coat out of a cloud.
The poem was as frail as daffodils
Against the silent, closing doors of dark.

Previously published, 'Skylark', Purdue University Calumet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 29 September 2009

A GREAT POEM SANDRA, WITH EXQUISITE IMAGERY! 10 + -Raj

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premji premji 29 September 2009

sandraji so throw me to poetic ecstacy mercilessly! thank you...................................................

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Indira Babbellapati 08 September 2009

such haunting metaphors...

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 September 2009

Brilliant, Fabulous, Delicious.

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Shashendra Amalshan 12 August 2009

Again a very beautiful, lovely write indeed... I like your use of language, very flowery... your poems are music to the reader's mind's eye.... love shan

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Bri Edwards 09 February 2014

i don't get it. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 July 2010

Medley of melody with blend of romance…fantastic imagery… congrats for sharing…Sandra Ma’am Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Clicked 'MPL' n

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Nikunj Sharma 28 December 2009

this is romantic and stimulating Sandra....subtle yet strong in its intent and meaning..melodious in its music...sweet as a maestro's flute...wow is the word for this....

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Vinod Kumar 26 December 2009

...And opened the doors of the Mind, Nice situation, thanks 10+

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Original Unknown Girl 20 October 2009

Gorgeous, delicate weave of words into pictures. HG: -) xx

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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