You Thought Of Me Poem by Practicing Poetess

You Thought Of Me

Rating: 5.0


You're on the road,
And far from here.
Gone again, it seems.
But distance
Cannot separate
Us two, for we're a team.

The phone just rang
And it was you
2,000 miles away.
You rang me just
To hear my voice
And that just made my day!

Monday, December 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: new friendship,soul mates,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hot off the press- - this poem just poured itself onto paper after my new, special someone just phoned me because he was thinking of me! I had stocked up on hugs and kisses when last I saw him Saturday, thinking these would have to last me until he returns in January from his trip. But that invisible connecting thread still holds!
He's the subject of my poems, and my inspiration these days!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2018

You are very right in expression. Distance cannot separate friendship and love. This is an interesting poem very beautifully penned....10

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Practicing Poetess 12 January 2018

Thank you very much, Kumar! Now all those old lovesongs about climbing the highest mountain and sailing the deepest sea, begin to make sense!

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Michael Walker 22 December 2017

A poet needs a Muse or inspiration and that is clearly what you have found. With cellphones, huge distances do not matter-there is instant communication.

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Practicing Poetess 22 December 2017

Can a Muse be male? I always thought that the Muses were the DAUGHTERS of Zeus! (LOL!) Anyway, I get what you mean. Puts me in mind of the Righteous Brothers' lovely old hit 'You're my soul and my inspiration'. Thank you, Michael.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 December 2017

Wow, such a lovely write👍👍👍

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Practicing Poetess 12 December 2017

Many thanks, Bernard! :)

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