You Make Me Want.... Poem by Practicing Poetess

You Make Me Want....

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You make me want
To take you in my arms,
Kiss the sadness from your eyes,
Wipe away the tears you've cried.
I want to hug away
The hurt that's in your heart,
Give you hope for a new start,
Reassure you we won't part.
If you need me, I'll be there
Anytime, and anywhere
To show you that I care,
Give your soul a place to bare.
Safety is a basic need
For all the human race
Let me be your safe place,
See relief across your face.

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Tuesday, February 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: caring,comforting,safety
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem originally written Nov.2018
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Hansell 03 March 2019

This person must be very special. Very nice write. Keep up the good work.

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Practicing Poetess 03 March 2019

This person IS very special. Thank you so much for the sweet compliment, Ray!

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 February 2019

A nice poem indeed on love, peace and happiness. Thanks for sharing.

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Practicing Poetess 28 February 2019

Thank you, Anil, for your comment!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 February 2019

want to hug away The hurt that's in your heart, Give you hope for a new start, Reassure you we won't part. If you need me, I'll be there....love that spreads comfort and sense of safety. very fine poem. tony

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Practicing Poetess 27 February 2019

Thank you so much, Dr. Tony! : -)

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Louis Rams 26 February 2019

I had wanted to continue this flow but there; s no where to go

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Practicing Poetess 26 February 2019

Louis, I wonder how many men will see this title, and read the poem with a totally different idea, not realising that it's about nurturing! Hahaha. Thanks for reading, and commenting! : -)

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