Patricia Gale

You Touched Something - Poem by Patricia Gale

Like red on a rose
The dew in the morning
The scent of lilies in the sun
You touched something...

The sound of a wild full moon
The passion only in the movies
Stars that shine like diamonds
You touched something…..

The scent left on your pillow
The lingering feel of your touch
Invisible dreams in daylight
You touched something…..

Blinded by a blizzard in mid winter
A penny on the tracks with a fast moving train
Left standing in the rain without an umbrella
You touched something…..

Comments about You Touched Something by Patricia Gale

  • (5/31/2010 1:05:00 PM)

    Yes the rain touches the heart like this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (4/27/2008 3:01:00 PM)

    There's a rarefied and enchanted atmosphere in this poem. It's entitled 'You touched something' but one feels something impalpable. Symbolistic, I'd say. (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 10:29:00 PM)

    This is a very pretty write, Patricia, nicely done!

    Lilly :)
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  • (4/19/2008 8:30:00 PM)

    your lines with rich nature imagery, the sentiments embedded in them..all this touch the reader..quite a touching one and soothing too (Report) Reply

  • (4/18/2008 6:45:00 AM)

    I loved 'the sound of a wild full moon'. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2008 2:42:00 PM)

    Absolutely lovely poem you really touched something ' my heart ' thanks big ten Chris (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 9:42:00 PM)

    A very mesmerizing poem Patricia! A pleasure to read this brilliant gem! ! ! *10*!
    Best Wishes! Friend Thad
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, October 26, 2009

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