Patricia Gale


Butterfly Dreams - Poem by Patricia Gale

Oh to be a butterfly and flutter my wings by your check
To have you admire me as I glide by your beautiful smile
To land upon your shoulder and watch you breathe
Oh to hear your voice sweetly recite
as you versed with magic tones
I would fly within your view

And from your sweet, sweet lips you would say,
Beautiful butterfly how I wish this night you were real
So I could hold you in my arms and love you always
Then the words would spin
My wings caught up in the twirl
And before your eyes…
I would be in human form
in your arms, forever more


Comments about Butterfly Dreams by Patricia Gale

  • Drtony Brahmin (12/26/2017 9:21:00 AM)

    And from your sweet, sweet lips you would say,
    Beautiful butterfly how I wish this night you were real
    So I could hold you in my arms and love you always..........then i shall appear as a human being....... how lovely these thoughts are......... so imaginative... how we all wish that...... thank you dear poetess. tony
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  • Bill Cantrell (11/7/2016 6:29:00 PM)

    What a absolutely wonderful poem, elegant and smooth with an innocent beauty.....this is poetry at its very best! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (2/11/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    I just love the theme of a butterfly. Butterflies are just so spiritual. And your poem is enchanting
    and I can feel your spirit soar through the whole of this beautiful work.....Karin Anderson
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (12/12/2008 6:24:00 AM)

    Tremendous sweet reflection! Great imagery! .........10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (4/24/2008 5:38:00 AM)

    A beautiful imaginative piece of write. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/1/2008 6:57:00 PM)

    Beautiful picture you have painted in words here Patricia your heart is speaking in this one, great work (Report)Reply

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  • (6/2/2007 10:50:00 PM)

    I LOVE IT! This is a beautiful poem. You are very creative. (Report)Reply

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  • Paul Butters (5/12/2007 7:54:00 AM)

    Nice. Best I can do is be a Butters! Be careful what you wish for though...! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/27/2007 10:20:00 PM)

    The shape of the stanzas reminds me of butterfly wings. Very stunning, and colorful. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/24/2007 1:03:00 PM)

    I see you are a fan of the butterfly? I too have used the butterfly in some of my poems....kudos to your work. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/2/2007 10:41:00 AM)

    Such a romantic wish. May you be the Monarch that perches in his rose garden and may he enjoy every sight of you there. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/24/2007 1:05:00 PM)

    Romanticism breathes deeply in your romantic voice. What a dizzy and wonderful ride! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/24/2007 5:44:00 AM)

    Wonderful verse full of mystical feelings of love entwined,
    Love duncan X
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  • (3/23/2007 10:03:00 PM)

    its really good...i like it alot! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ~stary night~ (Report)Reply

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  • (3/23/2007 8:06:00 PM)

    Great things from little things form... the butterfly holds such a small part of life but can bring the greatest of joy... to be both human and butterfly would be a true evolution...

    Alison
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/23/2007 7:23:00 PM)

    Such vivid dipiction....th' imagery says it all...
    F.J.R.
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  • (3/23/2007 7:20:00 PM)

    Patricia, a wonderful piece of writing! I am a huge fan of your work! !
    Always,
    Nick
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 10, 2011


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