You Were The Source Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

You Were The Source

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that day
you didn't give me anything
without your beautiful smiling;

that day
you didn't give me anything
without your succinct staring;

that day
I didn't find anything from you
without the fragrance of your beautiful rose;

that day
I didn't ask anything from you
because- that day you were
the source of my beautiful poems!



-May 02,2019 Chattogram

You Were The Source
Thursday, May 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: affection,me,poem,you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 July 2019

Without the fragrance of your beautiful rose! ! ! 🌷💃🖊 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 May 2019

you forget the day what you got right and complain of day alright Friend PYAAZ (onion) you send water my eyes no message nor massage in metaphorical poetry does love secretly lies and the lovers intelligent one all cover your eyes They kiss you as and when they request for a comment message or massage whichever poet friend MB of BD

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 May 2019

And I forgot to say, these point is very subtly brought out by the poet of You were The Source. Lovely write.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 May 2019

From the Muse a poet needs inspiration and nothing else. That day poem was all in poet's mind. One inspiration is in place, it become the Gangotri as its poetic source, and Ganges flow from there to gather mass.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 May 2019

The day needed a holiday for all other beauties as it was reserved for a poem and the poem needed pains in a heart and tears in eyes. A touching poem.

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