In deep breath
I draw your name
Inside
To fill every corner
Of my cell
As you make
My days and night
My joy and ecstasy
You turn
My tears into laughter
My pains into flower
The madness and rush
The cacophony and chaos
That surround me
Melts into stillness
I become calm
Full, happy and content
Like a cool, serene night.
Calm and compose...beautiful vivid n soft poem Mam...Really loved it...
As you make My days and night My joy and ecstasy You turn My tears into laughter My pains into flower.. your name is written in my heart....... lovely expressions.. thank u dear Bharati
God's name gives us such feelings that tears turn into laughter. Deep breath of life draws his name only. Serene light we feel with full joy. Very interestingly drafted nice devotional poem is shared here is excellent one.10
So smooth and serene... a perfect coach for such a beautiful theme. You have that magic touch- -that ability to reach out and touch your readers' lives and souls. A spirituality that whispers softly of eternal things. Well done, my friend. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++
such fresh and pure serene thoughts! ! thank you for sharing Poet! ! 10+++!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
excellent..and well done really heart touching poem...thanks or sharing
waiting for your new poem... hope will write soon.
Thank you so much for your inspiring words.
Thank you Abduhoo for your encouraging comment.