Your Smile, The Vivid Constellation Of My Cosmos Poem by Freespirit Juneja
Your Smile, The Vivid Constellation Of My Cosmos
Sitting on the river's shore
Mesmerized by its beutiful Lure
Ornated by blossoming flowers
Summon the avians from far n far
Just like your smile
Which When I come across
Enchants me in its divine gloss
As it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos
Clouds dance across the sun
Fuel themselves to have fun
Flowerbuds crown from their niche
Enjoying nature's eternal bliss
Just like your Smile
Which forms when your lips applause
And My despairs reach eternal pause
Because it's a vivid constellation of my cosmos
Leaves dangle on the trees
Dancing to the zephyr's keys
Butterflies leap from flower to flower
Carry colors far n far
Just like your smile
When it appears
Love embraces me
And fears disappear
Heart gambols as it widens across
Because it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos
Staring into the cerulean sky
Feel like making a gigantic cry
Are you left with anyone mr sky
To give a dying try or bid goodbye
No matter whomsoever you compile
You can't outshine my love's smile
Sorry Mr. sky for ur dreaded loss
But my love's smile, only forms the constellation of my cosmos
the person is relishing the feeling of being in love....
It highlights that the person who is in a beautiful place on the earth is comparing his/her love's smile to all the natural and beautiful things around him....
His / her love's smile(happiness) is supreme and nothing in the world can match it
A lovely poem - the only chanage I would make Sharad, would be to use the word `adorned` rather than `ornated` `in the third line of your first verse.
Juneja, your poems are very different from other poets. I am impressed from your expressions and impressions. I have read your 3 poems while reading I was thinking in my mind that I am there and every thing is going on in front of me. Wording you are using in your poems is amazing. I am your big fan. Pls add me as a friend. Keep it up.
I like this one a lot. It's very vivid, very free spirited, and peaceful, especially that first stanza.
This is written beautifully and seems to be straight from the heart truly amazing
Maybe when you wrote this you was in love very hard, as the love in writing and lines are really good to read again and again...why i like this poem..because you have something i like there...constellation and cosmos...it match my soul..it's magical to us to see now u use for your nice poem..that really work! _Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 7:03:51 AM # 1.0.0
You are the brightest star of the constellation! Spontaneous flow.