Your Words Like The Touch, Your Touch Like The Dew **** Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Your Words Like The Touch, Your Touch Like The Dew ****

Rating: 2.5


RAINBOW



Amazing lady you..
like you has never been..
like him has never seen..
and no one will know,

At night at the sea..
when there you will be..
in the wind you and who,

you will dance with the wind
when the start never end
with the waves both flow,

dropp me back to the rain
keep with you the Love's chain
then back me to the bow,

the amazing one are you...

water me and the buds.
teach the buds how to grow,

Your words like the touch,
your touch like the dew,

Keep on singing every day
toward you open the way
then the feeling let it glow,

keep on raising rate of beats
then the raising keep slow..

BROKEN HEARTS I TREAT..

n your breathing let me live
let me come, let me go..
let the sadness..me to blow,

how the chance became dance..
how the arts of the parts
let me see and you show..
God CREATION God draw,

words from the heart
from the feeling i will sew..
....................................
The wondrous one are you.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 02 August 2009

tamara beautiful words weaving in and out of this poem 10

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Ramesh T A 03 August 2009

Rainbow of life is colourful and beautiful as the words weaved in poem nice!

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Hazem Al Jaber 04 August 2009

its a pleasure and a happiness while i read your creative tamara.. you write with a such amazing nice touch... you give always a touch to your sweet words.. beautiful dear tamara.. hazem al..

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Afzal Shauq 09 August 2009

heart touching poem..liked it 10/10

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Mubeen Sadhika 09 August 2009

Great piece. Your words are so powerful but so poetic. I liked it a lot.

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Ken E Hall 30 November 2009

Everyone percieves things with a differ well I see this well done poem as a love tale between a mermaid and a fisherman of love with a touch of dew++++++10 regards

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Obinna Eruchie 16 October 2009

Tamara, this is wonderful, your words are like the touch and your touch is like the dew.

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Patti Masterman 02 October 2009

Very regal with the lightest touch- truly magical..(smile)

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Randy Hogan 22 August 2009

woven with string of love.. 10ssssss for this heart felt piece

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C. P. Sharma 21 August 2009

Amazing lady you........ Tell the way you flew! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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