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The Snake

Rating: 4.6

THE SNAKE

At the right

UNDER SHELF...silence THERE IN ABOX

ready TO BITE

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ME AND SHE WENT TO THERE

without key ...

BUT FOR ME ALWAYS DARE

NEVER BEEN HYPOCRITE

every thing was clear,
every scene was bright
..one bird and a hen...............patients families,
another couple of snakes but smal were there in the sight..

the small bird was smart, watching there from apart

for a call the other girl did she go
for a one as i guess was snake but little tall

on the desk 254 I did write, no drohan was at all

an error..then a line very light i drew

he was the one whom forced them to put a sign

but for me I refused as I used to with no fight
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WITH NO SOUND MY SCREEM..... HELP AND HELP

NO ONE HEARED AS IT SEEMS

KNOCKING WINDOWS... KNOCKING DOOR

WHILE THE SMALL FLOATING THERE ON THE FLOOR

NO ONE HELPED... NO ONE DARRRRRRRRRRRRE

THE BIG ONE STAYED STILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

SLOWLY MOVING WANT TO KILLLLLLLLLL

HER STOMACH WANT TO FILLLLLLLLLLL

THEN THE HEN WAS SWALLOWED



my friend was the hen...............my friend was the bell.............

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ONE OF THE BIG CAME

HE WAS WATCHING KILLING GAME

the small one with no tail

while the remained colored pale

EVERY THING TURNED TO HELL

WITH MY SHOES I CRUSHED

MANAGER FACE WAS FLUSHED

The cute bird was smart, watching there from a part

NOW THE BIG READY TO BITE

BUT MY BEACH SHE CAN'T REACH

CAN'T REACH THE MIND HIGHT
as for me always given anti dot
that was my dream yesterday on a flight
my dreams warning me, always right, always hot



NOW I'M READY FOR THE SHOT

not for me..but for her that WHITE... colored black is her DOT

DROHAN254....30/01/07

31/05/09

a dream about a true story..i was the small bird..my friend was the hen...the snakes were the one who made a trap for her, she was a victim, stapped by many as she dared to say no......the same snakes tried many times to kill me but always my dreams warned me and made me ready for any shot................the dream is described exactly as it was.........................................still i have that pain my friend.....

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 04 June 2009

Dramatically well penned.........fabulous poem....so expressive in uniqueness...10+++

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Amir Amzah 03 June 2009

a complex dream turn to a short poem... u paint ur dream very well.... creative poems.

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 02 June 2009

Very brave description of a complex dream. The write is amazingly refreshing. In some form of medine though (I forget which system it is) dreaming of snakes heralds good times ahead.

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 June 2009

scary dream, , but its any ways, , dream, , dreams are only dreams, while they some times gives us a happiness or some times a bad mood that might we scare.. any ways, , who afraid a snakes so he or she will meet it.. lets not think so much about any scarey dreams, even we should try to think about a happiness instead of a sadness.. dear writer.. you are an amazing poet who knows how to pen those feelings which you got through your dream.. 10+++

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Hi Tamara. And why would I fear such a wonderful depiction. We try to escape 'The Snake' and the venomous poison a deadly snake, with a bite makes. But acknowledgement is the 'key' to enlighten those who not before have seen. Nice.

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Leela Devi 27 December 2010

the snake is presented in very symbolical manner/rich with allusion

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Gosh huh hu snake…fine and dramatic… Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ramin Chaman 27 September 2009

Dear Tamara Most poems you full of metaphor. And yes one way of obligation. in the meantime you know to use words. and I invite you to write a comment on my new poem 19522425 - Grieve not ………… thanks.

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Kristina B; Williams 18 June 2009

LADY, YOU CAN WRITE.ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT NEVER B4 HAD I READ A POEM LIKE THAT, N I PROBALY NEVER WILL.UNLESS SOME COPYCAT LOOKING FOR AN OUTRAGIOUS THEME, TO MAKE ONES THOUGHTS N MIND SCREAM, ABOUT YOUR DREAM DOES...BRILLIANT 10S

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James Mclain 10 June 2009

it is there underneath as well, waiting for the return of the dare of the snake on the floor..you forgets, gracious mother in sand, your feet are bare, buff and safe...iip

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