Your eyes are raindrops-
Transparent and simmering
Upon the half opened flowers;
They hide my heart inside
Their throbbing immensity;
I feel like in heaven,
In a trance and half asleep;
Your eyes are raindrops;
Enclosing the azure sky within
Their sharp outlines;
I like to remain a prisoner forever
Gripped by their mysticism.
Eyes like raindrops. So beautiful & alluring.....loved the poem Anil ji...10 + to my favourite
This warm, beautiful piece has made me weep TFS Bravo! ! ! ! !
Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving!
Precious words loveliest worded, gorgeous poem, Anil Sir!
Congratulations Anil on member poem of the day! Well done *****
I suggest PROOFREADING a poem 2-3 times BEFORE SUBMITTING aka 'publishing', AND ONCE AFTER it shows up on one's poem page. 'YOU'RE' IS....wrong. bri : )
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful piece. Free flowing