You're Eyes Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

You're Eyes

Rating: 4.9


Your eyes are raindrops-
Transparent and simmering
Upon the half opened flowers;

They hide my heart inside
Their throbbing immensity;
I feel like in heaven,
In a trance and half asleep;

Your eyes are raindrops;
Enclosing the azure sky within
Their sharp outlines;
I like to remain a prisoner forever
Gripped by their mysticism.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 12 September 2023

A beautiful piece. Free flowing

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Yiyan Han 12 September 2023

alluring eyes...

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 September 2023

Eyes like raindrops. So beautiful & alluring.....loved the poem Anil ji...10 + to my favourite

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 September 2023

This warm, beautiful piece has made me weep TFS Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Arastu Goyal 08 October 2023

Enjoyed reading this! Wonderful!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2023

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2023

Precious words loveliest worded, gorgeous poem, Anil Sir!

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Jayne Louise Davies 07 October 2023

Congratulations Anil on member poem of the day! Well done *****

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2023

I suggest PROOFREADING a poem 2-3 times BEFORE SUBMITTING aka 'publishing', AND ONCE AFTER it shows up on one's poem page. 'YOU'RE' IS....wrong. bri : )

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2023

THAT makes this poem so beautiful, Bri!

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