Guess Who Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Guess Who

Rating: 4.3

he is the inspiration
to my every creation
Concerning my life and education
he helps me move every cloud
that stands in my way
telling me how proud
of me, he is every day
clouds! i have no more
preventing me from flying
thanks to my mentor
who taught me to keep climbing

Truthful Light Treeclimber 03 January 2009

beautiful! mentors are wonderful little forms of affection and your poem is the perfect affection catcher

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Reshma Ramesh 02 January 2009

nice poem for your mentor......well penned

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

Good write keep it up!

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I would say this is your best poem. It is so positive and inspirational. I really liked the clouds in the imagery. Karin Anderson

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

hmmm. who are you talking to cuz he mush appreciate this.. nice one! !

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he deserves the thanks..well said poem, ..

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Noha El3wdy 23 May 2009

its great to feel so, to have some one to inspire you so nice

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Janell Cressman 09 March 2009

A very up lifting poem that makes you feel good. nice one.

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Laila lili 09 January 2009

wonderful and nice the person who wrote it for you should read it in my opinion we should thanks every one who touch us even if it was one lettter i wish alyawes for you the best Laila Lili

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Naidz Ladia 07 January 2009

HE s very proud of u for thz wrds u described bout him..ur too gud for expressing ur heartfelt thanks 4 him....ths s a nice poem, , , naizz

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Tareq Jalabi

Tareq Jalabi

Russian Federation
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