Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 86 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

[02] Journey - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Let's start from nail
Finger is the pathway to reach the palm.

Warm fingers caress warm fingers
Palm kisses palm
While wrist sleeps on wrist.

Let's restart from hand
Elbow is the road to access arm.

Mild hand touches mild hand like creeper
Desire jumps into the pond of demand
Situation demands more and more.

Let's have some rest at armpit now-
Where both the passageway is soft.

Poem 09
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8

Comments about [02] Journey by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • Maia Padua (9/21/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    interesting write..
    brilliant thoughts...
    unique ideas


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  • (6/9/2009 7:06:00 PM)

    such a wonderful write......warm and inviting...well penned (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (6/8/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    what an ode to gentle hip hop love
    the hesitancy of intimacy
    the fire of desire
    meagre on to eager
    on the way to foreplay
    beautiful....pointed advances
    cheers an ten
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  • (6/8/2009 1:04:00 PM)

    nice write Ashraful...sensual...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (9/20/2008 5:45:00 AM)

    A decent and delicate stimulating love poem. Presentation is very good (Report) Reply

  • David Threadgold (9/15/2008 12:30:00 PM)

    Hi Ashraful. you describe a great journey very well. thankyou for the read. regards Dave T. (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2008 12:46:00 PM)

    A journey that you want to find is very desirable and true. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/24/2008 8:08:00 AM)

    fantastic true life journey........... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 4, 2012

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