[03] Alive Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq
[03] Alive
Dedicated to Poet Asif Aijaz
Slice the yesterday
Like the onion
And feed the tomorrow
Slice the love
Like the bread
And feed the dream
Slice the moment
Like the silence
And feed the desire
Slice the life
Like the time
And feed the death
On the edge of moment
You are still alive
Poem 02
Book 'Affluent Love- The Silent Killer' February 2012
Copyright Writer
Adarsha Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 978-984-8875-33-9
Good structure, I never considered life as slices, but this seems realistic.
a simple thought u hav composed in such a wonderful way wid this slice stuff n all...i njoyed reading..10++.
On the edge of moment You are still alive! So true...Wonderful it is that you take so few words to express so strong a message....Brishti Mazumdar
A nice poem..and full of image words.. and very fluent... and thanks for your nice comment on my poem/ A target/
Eid Greetings to you and your family! May it be a blissful day! Regrads
I loved the philosophy hidden behind the poetic imagery! 10+ -Raj Nandy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 2:01:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
love this, vivid and evocative