[03] On The Hill Top Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

[03] On The Hill Top

Rating: 4.6


On the hill top— Tillaghar, Sylhet
Round rest shed— Wooden pillars

Year 1981— on a pillar
It was written: æour love has broken here'

Spring noon— weeping vegetation
Cool jade green breeze

I will never know who they were
But now I always feel
An unseen impatient spore
At old-night inside my pillow



Poem 16
Book 'Affluent Love- The Silent Killer' February 2012
Copyright Writer
Adarsha Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 978-984-8875-33-9

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 12 June 2009

The beautiful grief of good-bye. Who could read this and fail to be moved? Exceptional. Always your friend, Sandra

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Eyan Desir 12 June 2009

your poems are always complex

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 13 June 2009

anguish! a good one. shan

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Saadat Tahir 15 June 2009

wow way with words and ideas....deeply felt....and dreamy carries such romantic connotation and the frivolity of life cheers an ten

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S Dey 15 June 2009

Always feel an unseen spore At old-night inside my pillow WoW! You expressed many a things in just two small lines! ! It made me feel as if I were there! 10+++++++++ for you! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2012

I will never know who they were But now I always feel An unseen impatient spore At old-night inside my pillow... love to read, , nice poem 10 it may revive when it survives one feels and believe when memories rush and relive

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Gargi Saha 28 June 2009

A lovely poem........... U get 10++++++++...............

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Rosalinda Martinez 23 June 2009

old night inside my pillow... it feels great to read this phrase. it is full of emotions, pictures, and memories. thanks for sharing. great write, sir!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

maarvellous...i love the way youve formatted the poem..disjointed abstract...adds tpo the sadness and abruptness of love gone bitter.....amazing write..

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will never know who they were — Always feel an unseen spore At old-night inside my pillow..... many lovers perish without telling their stories to wrold. this is tagedy..... i admire their courage and parting ways....10 'How are you' is written by me ingood humour

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