Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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(091) Cotton Candy - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

When I was walking down the road
I saw the big town fair
I got a nice cotton candy
That was bought with my share
I ate my candy happily
With coffee in a cup
But after one or two minutes
What I did was throw up!

Comments about (091) Cotton Candy by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • (3/15/2007 3:41:00 PM)

    Cotten candy... now thats one thing on earth i have never tried... But seeing what it did to you, i will pass and leave the being sick to you... Risha... a fun poem..10 (Report)Reply

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  • (1/27/2007 6:15:00 AM)

    Risha, I love cotton candy, but not with coffee. On its own its OK. I loved this little poem.

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  • Melvina Germain (1/13/2007 2:14:00 AM)

    Excellent imagry painted here Risha, I'm not sure I could stand the mix of cotton candy and coffee either. Oh oh too much cotton candy and of course the coffee didn't help.--Thanks Risha---Melvina (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2007 1:11:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem, I felt nausea too.
    good word painting.

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  • (12/18/2006 12:49:00 PM)

    Ha ha ha
    Good one.
    Don't you ever try the combination again

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  • (12/16/2006 12:32:00 AM)

    Nice poem Risha, cotton candy and coffee, yes think I'd throw up also. Now a candy apple, more to my liking. Hugs, Diane (Report)Reply

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  • (12/14/2006 11:01:00 AM)

    It put a smile on my face, I could feel it melt in my mouth, The coffee combo would have gotten me too. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/14/2006 10:24:00 AM)

    Serves you right for eating that sickly stuff! But as you are only 9 years old you can be forgiven. This is a nice rhyming poem, Risha.

    Love, Fran xx

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 9, 2010

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