17 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

17

Rating: 2.4


to my religion
most sincere
raka’ah
to do

to my country
most heroic
freedom
to begin

to my daughter
most precious
birthday
to life

to my pleasure of art
most innocence
Didkovsky
to love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Les Derbyshire 21 March 2009

Thank you for that Ahmad, I enjoyed it. Tight and focused, well thought through.

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Sebastine Humaemo 10 January 2009

well penned......words for all.........sebastine

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Fred Babbin 10 September 2008

Your words are very clear but straange, although I cannot put my finger on the strangeness.

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Aldo Kraas 31 August 2008

This poem is veryinteresting. What is interesting is that is so much detail and information. I believe that you didn't want to leave any suspence for your readers.

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Indira Renganathan 30 August 2008

Thanks for your comment Ahmad...quite an interestig 17....is it dedovsky or didkovsky...I guess it's a textile art correct? anyway nice write.10/10

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to my country most heroic freedom to begin nice flow of words with complete dedication and sincerity....10

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Michael Brock 06 May 2010

Very good flow and imagery. You gave me a sense of the moment and thought. thanks you for sharing Michael

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 October 2009

good vision, keep up. shan

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 June 2009

Introduce me to Didkovsky pleaes

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Ruth Walters 21 May 2009

To you Ahmad, a heart that's true. Ruthy; -D

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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