Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie - 26 Points (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

2008 Olympic Games - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

(dedicated to people who love sports)

citius
altius
fortius

fastes t
highest
strongest

eight, eight, eight
Chinese culture
bring fortunate

Beijing, China
Bird's Nest Stadium
marvellous ceremony

fantastic fireworks
laser performances
80 countries' leaders

five Fuwa
dancing Beijing
one world, one dream

five interlocking rings
blue, black, yellow, red, green
America, Africa, Australia, Asia, Europe

sportivity
above
all


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  • (4/17/2010 11:13:00 AM)

    I like sport and I like poem, and the two you have combined. Nice one, Ahmad. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/4/2010 4:16:00 PM)

    a summary of the 2008 olympic games in such a few, detailed, vivid words...masterfully done. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/20/2009 2:12:00 AM)

    citius
    altius
    fortius


    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (6/6/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    sports and fireworks.nice
    posted10
    surya
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  • (6/4/2009 1:06:00 PM)

    Breath taking, i loved it soooo much! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/21/2009 2:53:00 PM)

    Not strictly Haiku but very similar..... very well constructed poem this. Well done.

    Ruthy
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  • (5/8/2009 9:11:00 AM)

    nice poem which takes the breath away with its delicacy...mine ten (Report)Reply

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  • (5/2/2009 4:53:00 AM)

    Sportivity for everthing else too......Olympic spirits shouldn't play every four years in sports only, my friend. But for ever in EVERTHING (yea, sounds like the impossible dream) . But no harm in dreaming and trying...

    Cheers.
    SUbroto
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  • Indira Renganathan (4/27/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    An ever lasting contribution to Olympics...wonderful...I like the last stanza (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Interesting structure and choice of subject. Nicely put together. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    nice words! ! (Report)Reply

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  • premji premji (1/17/2009 1:24:00 AM)

    think of the poor who were wiped of from shanghai
    for olimpics 2008.........
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  • (9/10/2008 10:44:00 AM)

    I find your style very strange. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/2/2008 5:34:00 PM)

    Topical loved the Latin Tags (Report)Reply

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  • (8/27/2008 9:33:00 PM)

    I love sport as well. I wanted to read what value you found in such.

    GW62
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  • Prasetya Utama (8/27/2008 4:35:00 AM)

    sport, friendship...nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2008 7:37:00 AM)

    I did not see all of the Olympic opener, so I cannot appreciate all of your poem to the fullest. Not very sportive of me. I do like the ending:
    one world, one dream / five interlocking rings / blue, black, yellow, red, green / America, Africa, Australia, Asia, Europe
    This should appeal to everyone and is what the Olympics should be all about.
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  • (8/18/2008 2:54:00 AM)

    yes i agree quite incredible it was and your poem just does describe. good piece (Report)Reply

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  • (8/15/2008 12:26:00 PM)

    AHMAD, THE OPENING CEREMONIES WERE BEYOND BELIEF. ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE. ARE THEY THE SUPER-PEOPLE FROM OUTER SPACE? IT WAS SO EERIE AND MYSTICAL. THEIR PROFESSED CONSCIOUS CONNECTION TO NATURE/BEING IN THE PRESENT MAY EXPLAIN THEIR ABILITY TO PRODUCE MIND-BOGGLING PERFECTLY COORDINATED DISPLAYS. WOW AND DOUBLE WOW. THANK YOU FOR CAPTURING IT AND SHARING. CAROL HUGHES (RHODES) (Report)Reply

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  • (8/12/2008 5:06:00 PM)

    my favorite time ever! the olympics
    i love this poem, a wonderful summary
    beautiful!
    -maddy
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 9, 2008



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