Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie - 6 Points (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

17 - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

to my religion
most sincere
to do

to my country
most heroic
to begin

to my daughter
most precious
to life

to my pleasure of art
most innocence
to love

Comments about 17 by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    to my country
    most heroic
    to begin nice flow of words with complete dedication and sincerity....10
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  • (5/6/2010 6:54:00 AM)

    Very good flow and imagery. You gave me a sense of the moment and thought.

    thanks you for sharing
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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/27/2009 4:17:00 AM)

    good vision, keep up. shan (Report) Reply

  • (6/8/2009 4:59:00 AM)

    Introduce me to Didkovsky pleaes (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2009 2:50:00 PM)

    To you Ahmad,
    a heart that's true.

    Ruthy; -D
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  • (3/21/2009 12:11:00 PM)

    Thank you for that Ahmad, I enjoyed it. Tight and focused, well thought through. (Report) Reply

  • Sebastine Humaemo (1/10/2009 4:32:00 AM)

    well penned......words for all.........sebastine (Report) Reply

  • (9/10/2008 10:43:00 AM)

    Your words are very clear but straange, although I cannot put my finger on the strangeness. (Report) Reply

  • (8/31/2008 7:24:00 PM)

    This poem is veryinteresting.
    What is interesting is that is so much detail and information.
    I believe that you didn't want to leave any suspence for your readers.
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  • Indira Renganathan (8/30/2008 9:51:00 AM)

    Thanks for your comment Ahmad...quite an interestig 17....is it dedovsky or didkovsky...I guess it's a textile art correct? anyway nice write.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (8/14/2008 2:26:00 AM)

    oh wow, i really like this one. i dont completely understand it either, but that makes me love it even more. i love the emotion behind the words, like your so devoted to each thing, its just breath taking. i really like the style because its so simple that its makes the meaning stand out more. like the saying 'i love you', but with your style, you dont need to say much more because of the power behind the words. (Report) Reply

  • (8/12/2008 5:04:00 PM)

    im not sure i completely understand it
    but it doesnt need to make sense to me
    to be a wonderful work of art
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 9, 2008

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