((22) I´ll Give You My Eyes Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente
((22) I´ll Give You My Eyes
One step forward,
Stand up, please.
Let me explain need and virtue,
the mystery gravitating around you.
Let me break the distance.
A new voice is a return to hope.
Let´s make doves fly,
and forget routine, survival.
A walk, some confidence,
knots untie,
breathe slowly.
I´ll give you my eyes,
and feel you close.
Words tremble, rush,
so many things to say.
How could you preserve yourself sweet
and keep listening with soft ears?
Talking about honey
we discovered sweet voices
need care
nice give eyes and feel oh so close- so romantic thanks for sharing regards anjalie (do read mine ARE U THERE)
if that's a real story, all i can say is God help you! ! lol keep up the good poetry
This is a sweet honey coated poem.An eye opener for lovers.Good job Luis!
brilliant, the idea is lovely and your words are delicate thanks for sharing
Poem with profundity. I will give you my eyes, Then I shall see through your eyes, All distances will eliminate, Differences won't incriminate. CP
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 4:02:24 PM # 1.0.0
a lovely poem written on love, i liked it thanks 10 for this wonderful write rgds asif