A shadow with me all day
No body
This is crazy, this is crazy
Notes of a scintillating flute
No flutist
This is crazy, this is crazy
Breathtaking verse on paper
I was sleeping
This is crazy, this is crazy
Vermilion laden sky
Sunrise or sunset?
This is crazy, this is crazy
Dishevelled clothes, swollen lips
You came in my dream
I am crazy, I am crazy
Or is this the only sanity? ?
Agree with everyone else. Surrealistic or out of body experience nicely conveyed and we all had similar experiences. Excellent write
wow... people from this site are deep... well, what am i to expect... people here are poets, , , nice poem though!
A difficult decision of balance there TO, but crazy or not, a good piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
The serenity and beauty and passion...I LOVE IT! , REALLY! Love duncan X
Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley= 10/10!
Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley=
Crazy, maybe, but very sanely and artistically expressed. A pleasing mix of a dream-like hallucination and thoughtful philosophy. You express the intangible with great clarity. love, Allie xxxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
To dream is to subconsciencly voice whether crazed or sanity, , , , , loved this read, , , ,