(a) 49 (Love/Passion) This Is Crazy Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

To dream is to subconsciencly voice whether crazed or sanity, , , , , loved this read, , , ,

A difficult decision of balance there TO, but crazy or not, a good piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

wow... people from this site are deep... well, what am i to expect... people here are poets, , , nice poem though!

Agree with everyone else. Surrealistic or out of body experience nicely conveyed and we all had similar experiences. Excellent write

The serenity and beauty and passion...I LOVE IT! , REALLY! Love duncan X

Can I use this in a book im writing?

Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley= 10/10!

Wow I just love the repetitiveness in each verse..it pulled everything together so nicely.You hold so much talent for keeping the reader interested and for that I thank you...and your topics are usually always relateable which is another plus. Very profound thinking expressed in this one and just a all round Excellent poem! Take care of U =Shelley=

Crazy, maybe, but very sanely and artistically expressed. A pleasing mix of a dream-like hallucination and thoughtful philosophy. You express the intangible with great clarity. love, Allie xxxx

Excellent poem Tranquil, with great emotion.