Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 423,847 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Baby Boom - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Each ward full of new arrivals
For parents not less than festivals
Joy and happiness could be read on face
Who could definitely tell what their race was?

Full of cheers and cries all over in the warden
All are excited with their entries all of sudden
May be it is arrival of spring in garden
Plants are ready to make the show very often

It may be just beginning of new season
Flowers may boom with some reason
Fragrance may be spread with lot of joy
Soon children may be playing with beautiful toys

This land is beautiful garden with lot of arrivals
Some may breathe and some may face dismissal
What do they bring in for us to live little longer?
It is feeling of unique kind which grows stronger and stronger

Flowers of different kind and color strongly wish to survive?
We just look at them and do nothing or take no steps to revive
We just enjoy their momentary appearance and allow them to fade
We think of nothing and consider it as routine or mere trade

Why do we love children more in initial days?
What a beautiful way of offering smile in innocent way?
Do they bring all type of hopes in the form of bright ray/
Do we last long in the hope and express solidly in pray?

It is how the world moves on and so we to with our mission
We humbly let almighty to know when we make submission
We seek all the time His blessings for present and future
We need to be simple and honest and make it doubly sure

As children rise on their feet with the passage of time and grow
Their efficiency in all the respect and worth to show
We may realize the importance of their being
They may prove and carry us on their powerful wing


Comments about A Baby Boom by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (7/30/2010 3:03:00 AM)


    Welcome the Nascent Guest [NG] as welcomed by Nature by blooming flowers smiling sky pulsating spring nimble fountains all you’ve painted aptly…wonderful poetry on NG… thanks sharing…
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
    PS For me neonates are smiles of flowers
    n
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  • (6/29/2010 9:05:00 PM)


    Each ward full of new arrivals
    For parents not less than festivals
    Joy and happiness could be read on face
    Who could definitely tell what their race was?
    .. good indication....10
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  • (4/21/2010 6:30:00 PM)


    The contract with baby and flower is striking. pleasing end rhymes too. (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2010 8:47:00 PM)


    The fifth and seventh verses are the best ones with perfect rhyme words at the end of each line. There is a major problem with this poem though. It has no rhythm for the reader to follow as he or she reads it. This makes the reading very difficult. The subject is a very good one but the selection of the words used makes the meaning difficult to communicate smoothly. Regretfully, this poem needs work. --- Greenwolfe 1962 (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 7:27:00 PM)


    I like your comparison between a baby and flower. Its a lovely poem, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 13, 2010



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