A Beautiful Thing Poem by Linda I. Weischedel

A Beautiful Thing

Rating: 4.5

I love almost everything about you,
this is because I am a perfectionist and your not,
it drives me crazy when you don't take the time to clean out
the coffee pot.
I love your smile,
I love your eyes,
it's a beautiful thing knowing your
insightful and very wise,
I love the fact you tell me the truth and never make
the attempt to tell me lies.
I find you to be very keen, very smart,
it's a beautiful thing
knowing you have already given me your heart,
I found you to be a wonderful person
from the very start.

Michael Gale 12 October 2007

A very nice story of love for another person by another person, in accepting one as they truly are, no matter how bad their flaws may seem or be. I think, however that you are should be you're instead of your. I could be wrong but somehow doubt it. Just trying to help. Not trying to show off but be helpful. This was a great poem that i gave an easy tenner. Such great feelings of love. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Tracey Wynn 06 June 2009

This is a beautiful poem. I give it a 10

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Colin Jeffery 16 July 2008

You are a very good poet. Brilliant.

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Cassy Carmody 15 July 2008

Your poem was really nice and it get a 10

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Seema Chowdhury 05 December 2007

linda its a lovely poem. it truly conveys your love and appreciation for your loved one. enjoy your poetic life. take care. seema

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rajagopal haran 14 November 2007

i love this poem Linda; Love sees no faults of the beloved because Love is beautiful and this poem also

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