yoonoos peerbocus

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A Bee's Life Journey

Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

With the freedom of an outlaw,
bees to whom earth
is but a benevolent garden
and what matters
purely honey furnished interior,
swarm hive in fragrant peasant tree
or even in fetid city refuge.like rain,
bees make no distinction and
brew for anyone.seeing darts as opportunity
of silent service, they
buzz wing far inside the brewery of the pollen
to freight back
that which could sweeten what is bitter in man.

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Comments about A Bee's Life Journey by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Milos Jovanka (3/25/2020 4:32:00 PM)

    A bee is a Gardner of mother earth, this poem is a beautiful ode to one of natures most coveted children. Bless you for this wonderful poem(Report)Reply

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  • Ms Doubtfire (12/29/2019 11:50:00 AM)

    Mr. BOGUS, how come you always get it right every single time!(Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (8/1/2019 11:17:00 PM)

    A great poem, A master piece by my friend Peer Peerbocus.(Report)Reply

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  • M SchiotisM Schiotis (6/18/2019 11:06:00 AM)

    Such sweet little creatures, I like the experience your poem gives of being a bee.(Report)Reply

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  • Anjandev Roy (3/30/2019 11:06:00 PM)

    Purely honey furnished interior. Wonderful poem. anjandev roy.(Report)Reply

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  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (1/20/2019 9:22:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem!
    A bee's life journey is full of melodies and work of wandering day and night.- wonderful character.
    10*10*10*10(Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (7/25/2018 9:47:00 AM)

    Every line is out standing with beauty and richness of an intelligent write....very inspiring poem...thank you for sharing this wonderful work here sir(Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (7/8/2018 9:23:00 PM)

    bees make no distinction and
    brew for anyone.seeing darts as opportunity
    of silent service
    Service brings honey for the bitter life.(Report)Reply

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  • Anamika UsAnamika Us (7/2/2018 11:42:00 PM)

    heart touching poem(Report)Reply

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  • Ruta MohapatraRuta Mohapatra (4/6/2018 12:17:00 AM)

    Liked the poem. Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Mohit KatyalMohit Katyal (7/15/2017 12:09:00 AM)

    its pretty good.. keep it up(Report)Reply

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  • Brian JohnstonBrian Johnston (6/7/2017 3:30:00 AM)

    A recent book (Botany of Desire) on plants suggests that by making themselves useful to human beings certain plants have developed a great strategy for ensuring their own survival. Certainly bees fit nicely into this category as well. To bee sweet in this sense though is certainly not Love or indeed service, just a variation on survival of the fittest! Ha! I like the poem though.(Report)Reply

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  • Nilima DebNilima Deb (5/28/2016 3:15:00 AM)

    the secret of life how to lead with all intelligence! wonderful poem, enjoyed nicely.looking for more such aromas.(Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (6/29/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    bees r very clever they give us honey bt do not give us technique to make honey(Report)Reply

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  • Matthias PantaleonMatthias Pantaleon (10/24/2012 11:52:00 PM)

    There is no life of service life a bee's dedication to duty...(Report)Reply

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (7/27/2012 8:33:00 PM)

    Adorable bees! Lovely description of their selfless love.(Report)Reply

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  • Simon Odhiambo (7/23/2012 5:00:00 AM)

    Interesting and mind-involving. I like:
    Till laden with what is sweet only
    Yet takes no credit
    Save continues to hold and serve
    Something this exact, the real(Report)Reply

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  • Poet Dragon (7/9/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    Listen to the sound a honey bee makes eternally....Ommmmmmmmmm(Report)Reply

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  • Jay AguinigaJay Aguiniga (7/1/2012 10:12:00 AM)

    Very good and discriptive.
    You are such an awesome writer.
    Thanks for sharing my fellow poet.(Report)Reply

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  • Dickson MsetiDickson Mseti (4/10/2011 3:17:00 AM)

    sir, what can i say about this one, only MAY THE GOOD LORD BLESS AND KEEP FOR A LONG TIME FOR YOU TO GIVE US THE POWER OF WISDOM YOU HOLD INSIDE. BEES, I WISH I COULD BE LOKE YOU.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 20, 2018