Crimson Love

Rookie - 70 Points (18 / Prince Charming)

A Bit Sadistic - Poem by Crimson Love

Knives rip,
unwilling wrists.
As tongues touch
blades love.
As you solemnly bleed,
Crimson pours from sadistic veins.
Only wishing for
the perfect death.
The bloodiest...
The one that will hurt the most.

Comments about A Bit Sadistic by Crimson Love

  • Doris Cornago (1/13/2014 7:38:00 PM)

    This is truly graphic CL. And yet you live. That is the magic of a poem, or the skill of a magician, who is the poet who crafts death. After you come back, you will feel life more vividly as one of the undead, but not a zombie. There is a big difference, and only poets know this. Truly a skilled magician weaving magic from the sordid. (Report) Reply

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  • Dipy Hermonite (8/22/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    Gosh. I could feel the power. Good stuff. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (7/23/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    A very powerful write.. keep writing on. (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2011 5:37:00 PM)

    'Knives rip,
    unwilling wrists,
    as tongues touch,
    blades love'
    my favorite lines
    relatively short poem, especailly for you to make but still hold much pain,
    emotion, everything that you truely feel
    lovely poem!
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  • (12/4/2011 1:05:00 PM)

    Short but very very powerful, a truly great poem.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    Return Of The Crow.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 4, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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