### A Bite Of Being Apart Poem by sarwar chowdhury

### A Bite Of Being Apart

Rating: 3.7


That the eyes burning …….. Intense inferno
Don’t afraid you friends The eyes can
Smile heartful in the hellhole A bite
Of being apart imposed on Love tuneful
Captured right he and she Foaming tempestuous sea!
Said- come on love …………Swim to sense the yummy YUMMY!

-August,2009-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 24 August 2009

Wonderful facts of being apart! .. with such clues get healed..! well written!

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Ravi Sathasivam 23 August 2009

New style. Very creative. Nice poem to read it. Enjoyed

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Estrella Baldemosa 22 August 2009

unusual...but interesting. keep it up

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Akram Saqib 22 August 2009

a novel way of writing poetry

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~ Jon London ~ 22 August 2009

Bravo! ! ! ....Loving the fresh style my friend..great flow of sensitivity and jam packed with emotions that flood this amazingly composed piece....Fine work from you Sarwar......keep them coming 10++++

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Anand Madhukar 17 September 2009

Your style takes a little getting used to, but once the reader has done that, its pure magic.

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Supriya Prathapan 12 September 2009

You have a very unique style of writing.

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 29 August 2009

Crisp, sweet love poem.A few metaphors used nicely.Well done Sarwar

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 August 2009

Sir..this is indeed a very creative piece...compelling...the title is what attracted me the most..I loved it..10

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Allan Macli Borges 27 August 2009

interesting one. very creative idea. keep it up.

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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