That the eyes burning …….. Intense inferno
Don’t afraid you friends The eyes can
Smile heartful in the hellhole A bite
Of being apart imposed on Love tuneful
Captured right he and she Foaming tempestuous sea!
Said- come on love …………Swim to sense the yummy YUMMY!
-August,2009-
Bravo! ! ! ....Loving the fresh style my friend..great flow of sensitivity and jam packed with emotions that flood this amazingly composed piece....Fine work from you Sarwar......keep them coming 10++++
Your style takes a little getting used to, but once the reader has done that, its pure magic.
Crisp, sweet love poem.A few metaphors used nicely.Well done Sarwar
Sir..this is indeed a very creative piece...compelling...the title is what attracted me the most..I loved it..10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful facts of being apart! .. with such clues get healed..! well written!