A Broken, Pained Heart. Poem by Michael Gale

A Broken, Pained Heart.

Rating: 5.0


Aye...
This heart of stone and marble pieces.

Cracked apart in so many urban specks...
Poor, poor heart, poured away.

Etched at, until shards been laid...
This heart broken clean on through.

More of more pain, on, on, thorough due...
Due this pained heart, due anew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 18 January 2009

This ones a sad poem of couplets, which needs some rural air to rejuvenate its soul. Nice one Michael

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 January 2009

a beautiful string of couplets...! ! ! : D

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Poor, poor heart, poured away. Rachel Ann Butler

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Ana Zaldivar 30 January 2009

this is a very beautiful poem. the words you used are so precise and nice. thank you for sharing this

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Eddie Roa 29 January 2009

The lament is so engrossing. Good write.

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Lynda Robson 21 January 2009

Brilliant write Michael, poor pained heart, 10 Lynda xx

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 January 2009

This is not just a pained, but it is a tortured heart. GW62

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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