A Broken Heart! Poem by Michael Gale

A Broken Heart!

Rating: 4.4


Memories are fleeting all through the night...
Heart beating fastly t'wards future's near
plight.

Forgetting heart's anguish of sorrowful state...
Yearning one's love instead of their hate.

Lonely of love that still lingers on...
Like a sliver o' light, beaming straight from the sun.

Passing through life's window drenched totally in black...
Life's empty chamber, under attack.

The candle is lit, by hope of one's heart...
Burning forever, and never apart!


Michael Jeffrey Gale

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 14 January 2006

This is a great poem on love and loss Michael, and welcome to poem-hunter. I look forward to reading more of your work. Angie

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Duncan Wyllie 19 February 2006

Such hope in this one and the words flow like a calm river.Thankyou for sharing your art.Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 20 April 2006

Hope in a peaceful write. Patricia Gale

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Tracey Collins 05 May 2006

Nice rite about A broken heart, I don`t like broken hearts, I like happy hearts instead LOL LOL LOL. I have A happy heart with Geoff right now.

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MOVING PIECE, MIKE...YOU SPIN THE PISTURES LIKE A KALEIDOSCOPE STRONG CLOSE, , , BTW...WHY DON'T YOU USE YOUR MIDDLE NAME.... SOUNDS VERY LITERARYESQUE....YOUR NAME... YOUR CALL SMOOTH WRITE...'''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Duncan Wyllie 11 November 2008

Beautiful * Well Worth Reading Love duncan X

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Michael Fischer 24 March 2007

Nicely done. You definitely have a knack for writing. Keep it up! -Michael

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Rene Bennett 02 March 2007

WOW! ! Excellent! Beautiful! ! Your words flow like a fine brandy! I can't wait to read more of your work. Rene'

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John Tiong Chunghoo 02 February 2007

yes, the candle is lit by the hope of one heart. very effective. intelligent write.

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Melvina Germain 01 September 2006

Heartfelt, I enjoyed this poem very much--Thankyou--Melvina

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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