Michael Gale

Rookie (? / Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.)

A Broken Heart! - Poem by Michael Gale

Memories are fleeting all through the night...
Heart beating fastly t'wards future's near
plight.

Forgetting heart's anguish of sorrowful state...
Yearning one's love instead of their hate.

Lonely of love that still lingers on...
Like a sliver o' light, beaming straight from the sun.

Passing through life's window drenched totally in black...
Life's empty chamber, under attack.

The candle is lit, by hope of one's heart...
Burning forever, and never apart!


Michael Jeffrey Gale


Comments about A Broken Heart! by Michael Gale

  • (11/11/2008 3:04:00 PM)


    Beautiful * Well Worth Reading

    Love duncan X
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  • (3/24/2007 2:24:00 PM)


    Nicely done. You definitely have a knack for writing. Keep it up!
    -Michael
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  • Rene Bennett (3/2/2007 4:23:00 PM)


    WOW! ! Excellent! Beautiful! ! Your words flow like a fine brandy! I can't wait to read more of your work.

    Rene'
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  • john tiong chunghoo (2/2/2007 8:21:00 AM)


    yes, the candle is lit by the hope of one heart. very effective. intelligent write. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (9/1/2006 8:47:00 PM)


    Heartfelt, I enjoyed this poem very much--Thankyou--Melvina (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2006 11:51:00 AM)


    Beautiful write! I enjoyed it very much! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/29/2006 7:10:00 PM)


    MOVING PIECE, MIKE...YOU SPIN THE PISTURES LIKE A KALEIDOSCOPE
    STRONG CLOSE, , , BTW...WHY DON'T YOU USE YOUR MIDDLE NAME....
    SOUNDS VERY LITERARYESQUE....YOUR NAME... YOUR CALL
    SMOOTH WRITE...'''''''''''''''''FRANK
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  • (5/5/2006 12:43:00 PM)


    Nice rite about A broken heart, I don`t like broken hearts, I like happy hearts instead LOL LOL LOL. I have A happy heart with Geoff right now. (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2006 8:55:00 PM)


    Hope in a peaceful write.

    Patricia Gale
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  • (2/19/2006 3:23:00 PM)


    Such hope in this one and the words flow like a calm river.Thankyou for sharing your art.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2006 7:07:00 PM)


    This is a great poem on love and loss Michael, and welcome to poem-hunter.
    I look forward to reading more of your work.

    Angie
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 22, 2010


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